Free message clarity tools · by Dee Patience

Stop wasting money on marketing people don't get.

A stranger gives your message about six seconds. If they can't tell who you help, what you fix, and what they get, they scroll. These tools find the leak and hand you the fix.

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Can a stranger understand you in 6 seconds?

Answer a few questions, or paste a link and let us read the page. You get a 0 to 10 score, your weakest variable, and 3 fixes for this week.

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No link or copy yet? Build your pitch step by step.

What brings you here today?

Tap the one that fits and we'll take you straight to a few quick questions. You can switch paths any time.

You'll get a 0 to 10 score, your weakest message variable, and 3 fixes to make this week.

Fill in what you know. If you're not sure about something, say so, "I don't know" is useful information.

Add a link or a sentence here, then tap "Fill it for me" on any field below and we'll draft it from your own words. You edit before scoring.

Specific beats broad. "Everyone" is not an audience. If you don't know yet, say "I'm not sure", the score will reflect it.

Tell us who you help, what you sell, or paste a link/copy so we can score your message.

Optional fields stay optional. Blanks show up in the score, that tells you where to focus first.

Reading your page and scoring it

    About 30 seconds. Keep this tab open.

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    out of 10
    Amber · Promising, but leaking
    Red 0 to 3.9  ·  Amber 4 to 7.4  ·  Green 7.5+

    Strong, specific Person and Problem, but thin proof and a soft next step are leaving conversions on the table.

    Person ClarityCan buyers tell this is for them?7
    Problem UrgencyDo they feel the pain now?8
    Promise ClarityCan they picture the result?6
    Proof / CredibilityDo they believe you can do it?4
    CTA / Next StepDo they know what to do next?5
    Your biggest clarity leak
    Your Person and Problem are sharp: a corporate woman who undercharges and stays invisible will read this and think 'that's me.' That's the hard part, and it's working.
    Your strongest six-second pitch
    I help ex-corporate women price and pitch their coaching with confidence.
    Homepage versionI help women leaving corporate price and pitch their coaching so they stop undercharging and book clients in 30 days.

    Use the short version in your headline, bio, and first line. Use the homepage version on your site or sales page. Your emailed fix plan includes every rewrite option and the full gap analysis.

    What your message is saying
    Person
    Mid-career women leaving corporate to start a coaching business
    Problem
    They have deep expertise but freeze on pricing and messaging, so they undercharge and stay invisible
    Promise
    A clear offer and pitch they can sell with confidence in 30 days
    Your 3 fixes this week
    Fix #1
    Add one specific proof point above the fold, a named client, a real result, or 'helped 40+ coaches raise their rates.' One concrete number beats five vague claims.
    Fix #2
    Name your mechanism in the Promise. Not just 'sell with confidence', say HOW (your framework, your 30-day method). That's what makes it yours.
    Fix #3
    Swap 'Learn more' for one low-friction next step that matches a cold visitor, a free pricing checklist or a 6-second pitch score, not 'book a call.'
    Now what? Your one next step

    Put your new pitch on your first screen.

    Your first screen is the line people read first, on your homepage, landing page, or profile. It is where they decide to keep going or leave. Change that one thing first.

    Your weakest spot was Proof. As you do, add one result, number, review, or reason to believe.

    Pick how you want to do it. Same step, your call on the help.

    One thing first. Do not redesign your whole site yet. Replace the first screen, then come back for the rest.

    Re-run the analyzer after you fix it. Watch the score move.

    Get your full fix plan in your inbox

    We'll send your score, your strongest pitch, every rewrite option, the full gap analysis, and your 3 fixes with copy-paste examples. A simple plan you can use on your homepage, ads, bio, or sales page.

    See a sample fix plan first →

    Dee will also be in touch about sharpening your pitch.

    "Start over" permanently erases this report, we don't store it anywhere, so it can't be recovered. Save as PDF or copy it first.

    The real cost

    Your work is good. Your words are losing.

    • Ads need twice the budget, because the click has to do the explaining your headline didn't.
    • People say "sounds interesting" and ghost. They didn't hate it. They didn't get it.
    • Referrals stall, because nobody can repeat what you do in one sentence.

    None of that is a marketing problem. It's a message problem. And a message problem is fixable this week.

    Start where you are

    Pick your situation.

    Every tool runs on the same formula: I help [Person] who [Problem] get [Promise].

    I want to beat my competitors Coming soon  Compare your message to competitors you know, or let us find them through your buyer's eyes.
    How it works

    Three steps. Two minutes. No account.

    1

    Show us your message

    Paste your link or answer a few quick questions. We read the live page for you.

    You get: nothing stored, nothing published. It stays in your browser.

    2

    See where it leaks

    Your 0 to 10 score checks Person, Problem, Promise, Proof, and your next step.

    You get: the one weak spot to fix first, plus 3 fixes for this week.

    3

    Get the deep report

    Drop your email and we research your real buyers and competitors.

    You get: your message rewritten in real buyer language, with sources.

    All free while in beta

    The Toolbox

    Five free tools. One job: get you to the message your market already wants.

    Clarity Score Analyzer Start here

    Score your message 0 to 10 across the five variables that decide whether strangers buy. Get your weak spot, 3 fixes, and your strongest six-second pitch.

    Get my score →
    Competitor Finder Soon Compare your message to competitors you know, or let us find them. Live research, real links. Pain Analyzer Soon The pain you state vs the pain they feel at 11pm, and what you're really selling underneath.

    Want to see what the deep report looks like first? View a sample report

    Built for sellers

    What are you selling?

    The message problem looks different depending on what you sell. Start with the right tool for yours.

    A physical product

    "People click my listing but don't buy. The reviews are good. I don't know what's wrong."

    Start: score your listing, then compare it to winning listings with the Competitor Finder (coming soon).

    A service or coaching

    "People say it sounds interesting, then ghost. Referrals work but my website doesn't."

    Start: score your homepage now; the Pain Analyzer (coming soon) will find the pain that makes people move.

    A book

    "When someone asks what it's about, I talk for two minutes and watch their eyes drift."

    Start: pitch it through the launch path, then use the Hook Analyzer for content that sells it.

    Clothing or a lifestyle brand

    "My product is really an identity. 'High quality' and 'unique style' sound like everyone else."

    Start: score your message. The Pain Analyzer (coming soon) will name what you're really selling.

    A personal brand

    "I have a podcast, a book, services, and a course. My bio reads like a junk drawer."

    Start: sort your offers to find the through line, then build your Profit Profile.

    An online store

    "Traffic comes in, carts stay empty. Every ad dollar feels like a coin flip."

    Start: score your homepage, then run hooks for the ads so the promise matches the page.

    The deep report · free while in beta

    Your score is the start. The report is the payoff.

    After your score, drop your email and we run the same research sequence Dee uses with clients, on your message:

    • Real buyer language pulled from reviews, Reddit, and forums, with linked sources. No made-up quotes.
    • Your top competitors, why they're winning, and the gap they left you.
    • The path your buyer takes before they find you, and where you lose them.
    • Your message rewritten on that evidence: pitches, hooks, and a 7-day plan.
    See a sample report →
    [PHOTO PLACEHOLDER: Dee Patience portrait.
    Art prompt: warm editorial portrait of a confident woman brand strategist, deep teal backdrop, soft golden light, gentle smile, premium magazine style.]
    The person behind the method

    Built on the Six Second Pitch method, used since 2014.

    [PROOF PLACEHOLDER, needs Dee's real material: 2 or 3 sentences of Dee's authority in her own voice, plus one true client result with a number (for example a real before/after clarity score from a named, permissioned client). No invented quotes. Source from AMA VOC + CLIENTS.md when this ships for real.]

    Six seconds. That's the test.

    Run your message through it now. It's free, takes two minutes, and tells you exactly what to fix first.

    Get my free clarity score →
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